Thursday, May 13, 2010

COM: Editing part 232

Of course, local newsprint is not immune from the national poor editing epidemic . . .

From the Kerrville Daily Times:

“The kids weren’t two excited about it, but they’ll get over it when summer comes,” said Hunt superintendent David Kelm.

. . . and this, in addition to being just a poorly wrought sentence:

What has followed since the most talked about last place finish in Comfort track history has been a since of pride.



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